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1. Matthew - June 29, 2018 @ 9:06 pm

   This was probably the first MPREG genre book I have ever read, I thought it was decent on the erotic scenes. I wish that the main character was a little more defiant with his predicament but resigns himself into acceptance relatively early. The science fiction aspect of the story could’ve been elaborated on, like how far away was their planet to earth…? was the race that released a virus on the voldari an immediate threat to earthlings? Why couldn’t their race use their nanite technology to alter their own physiology but instead needed humans?, etc. Despite these logic hurdles I was invested enough to finish the book to its completion and ended up using what was left of my amazon kindle unlimited to get the rest of the series. I wanted more drama, backstory, and intimacy from the characters. Never underestimate your audience’s attention span, while it’s nice to be descriptive on graphic sex scenes don’t be afraid to add more depth to the characters and story. Brains need stimulation too. “This ended at 95% with a few add-ons tacked on. There were more than I like to see of typos and grammar mistakes.” – Amazon reviewer (To be fair you only had about less than 5 errors that you had to fix, “They” instead of “the”. The scene with the orb had a mistake as well… because I’m ocd I fixed my copy in calibre.

   • Tabatha Austin - July 1, 2018 @ 2:05 am

     Those are good thoughts and I appreciate the feedback (meant with sincerity).

     The race that released the virus is pretty much dead. The Volardi aren’t forgiving to their enemies.
     Good, nah excellent question on the nanite technology. The Volardi for all their wisdom can be short sighted and stubborn in some areas. I do have a story that touches on why they don’t use the technology on themselves but currently it’s in my head. =) Off to fix the typos. Thank you very much.

     -Tabatha

2. Minnie Jones - July 21, 2018 @ 6:35 pm

   Love your books

   • Tabatha Austin - August 8, 2019 @ 11:54 pm

     Oh thank you. That’s very nice of you. =)

3. Kamila Szczepańska - June 24, 2019 @ 3:24 pm

   Now I’m on book three and I’m little disappointed that it’s not about the Nate the ‘Dick Ass’ and his not so straight story… But in far I really like this series. I’m wish you lot’s of inspirations to write even more than now.

   Your fan from Poland, K.

   • Tabatha Austin - August 8, 2019 @ 11:54 pm

     Totally understandable. I’d want to know what happened to him too. =)

     There is a free story and it’s about him!

     Thanks from Texas.

     http://eepurl.com/dKTJqM

4. Wen - August 8, 2019 @ 6:19 am

   I was wondering what happened with to the book “The galaxy ‘s worst omega?

   • Tabatha Austin - August 8, 2019 @ 11:53 pm

     Hello! It should be available via this link. Let me know if you don’t get it. 🙂

     http://eepurl.com/dKTJqM

5. Minnie - January 24, 2020 @ 3:39 am

   Yum

6. ken - April 7, 2020 @ 8:28 pm

   would have liked to know more about what happened in volardi during the battle with the gloom? and more in depth characterisation of melk, trevah, & james if you will. I see many opportunities to expand and continue the story 😉 all in all, an engaging read

7. ken - April 7, 2020 @ 8:29 pm

   would have liked to know more about what happened in volardi during the battle with the gloom? and more in depth characterisation of melk, trevah, & james if you will. I see many opportunities to expand and continue the story 😉 all in all, an engaging read 😎

8. Darlene - November 20, 2022 @ 1:09 pm

   I can’t see James’ story on Amazon anymore. I was trying to figure out the timelines and publication dates. Is Omega One the first omega and not James as no one but Henry knows and we first meet Henry here. Are they hiding on Earth?

   Also where does Helian fit into our timeline of New Texas sheriffs (ie Nate’s visit and the following 20 years…not trying to leave spoilers) It feels like Helian would be after…much after and Volardi live for so long.

   • Tabatha Austin - November 24, 2022 @ 3:44 am

     Hiya! I took it off since it was an old story, but made it free with sigh-up. Just let me know what file type you like and I’ll send it to you. 🙂 Perhaps I’ll put it back. Seems like people are looking for it.

     Also, thanks for being interested enough to ask. Omega One is the first accidental Omega (as far as Brandon and Alen know). The Volardi aren’t always upfront. The nanites were always intended to check for fertility. Alen isn’t a scientist exactly, and just knows enough to modify Volardi tech. He didn’t figure out the nanite’s true purpose.

     James was the first intentional Omega. They (Brandon and him) both got converted very close to each other. Eventually Brandon will just give James his spot in history since Brandon has enough fame.

     I should make a time line I think. 🙂

     Helian and New Texas, are a side story for now. I got sidetracked one it to be honest. Helian’s is a few years past the Volardi’s arrival. At least 5 from what I remember. Maybe about 15 years before Nate’s revisit to Augo. A lot of that is on me for not having a static timeline. 🙂

     But yeah, I’ll give you that book if you like.

     Have a nice one,

     Tabatha